Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers; FFfAW – Week of 03-01-2016
TITLE: Symphony for Lost Souls
WORD COUNT: 172 Words
I wander the night, searching for the wind that will take me to a place that I belong. But there is no wind. There never is. Just the dark sky and looming clouds—a perfect mirror of my future.
Several drunken calls and whistles follow me as I go by, heels clicking on concrete. I pay them no heed. My wind will not come from there, of that I am certain.
My feet keep walking, destination still unknown—just like every other night. But then the unexpected happens. From the park a few feet ahead, the sound of a guitar reaches my ears.
Hastening over I found him sitting before a blaze, head bent and fingers dancing. The melody strikes my heart, twining with my own sense of loss. I gasp and he looks up, eyes like hellfire. The trees rustles and I take a seat opposite of him, staring at each other. Whatever he saw brings a wry smile to his lips and he resumes playing the symphony of lost souls.
♦THE END♦
Thank you for reading.
—N
Loved it! Two lost souls have found each other. A touch of romance with a happy ending. Love it!
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Hehehe~~ Thanks~~~^^ /bows
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Gripping and haunted tale. Perhaps, her finding him will bring some sort of beautiful melody, as they are no longer lost souls.
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Perhaps~~^^
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An eerily poetic tale. Nice work!
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Thank you~~^^ /bows
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I love how this could be the start to a beautiful relationship or a massive disaster. Great stuff!
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Hehe~~^^ or a beautiful disaster? xD
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or that 😀
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Nice story and really excellent style. Each word was like a note from a perfectly tuned guitar. Well done.
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Thank you very much~~^^ /bows
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I loved this.
Very well written.
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Glad you loved it~~^^
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Fabulous ambiance – well done!
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Thanks~~^^ /bows
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Love the poetic way you write narrative!
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Thanks~~^^
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I’m hearing the tune of a beautiful love song coming up. 🙂
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Perhaps?
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Two souls destined to meet.
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A beautifully written story. 🙂 I hope their lost souls find solace in each others company. Really well done.
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Excellent story!
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Gripping and excellent. I feel something good about this.
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