Sunday Photo Fiction – October 4th 2015
TITLE: Flying Free
WORD COUNT: 200 words
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I drift along this cobblestone path, directionless as the auburn leaves resting there and dancing around me. They move according to the whims of the wind and I to the whims of everyone. How I envy those leaves.
A gust of wind rustles through, lifting the scattered ones into the air and snatching others from their attachments. I look up, wondering when my wind will blow to lift me up and away from my chains. Surely there must be one out there for me.
I keep moving, dragging my hefty baggage, when a particularly raucous wind shoves at me from behind. I stumble forward but my ties pull me in the opposite direction. That constant tug-o-war I have grown accustomed to.
A song dances upon the wind, inviting my freedom — or maybe it’s just a blaring horn. I turn to greet the player, my shackles giving a frightful clamor. My wind has come at last. The burdens are put down and my soul bleeds free. At last! At long last, I am free to swim among the leaves in this formless, colorless ocean.
The wind rises up with a roar, taking the autumn leaves and I on a whimsical ride.
♦THE END♦
Thank you for reading,
— N
Very beautiful description and giving a visual picture through words. Showing not telling. I’m glad that he found freedom in the leaves.
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🙂 Thank you~~^^
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I love the descriptiveness you have in this, and the freedom at the end. Makes it sound so blissful.
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Thank you~~^^
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You’re welcome 🙂
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A wonderful description of freedom.
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Thank you~^^
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Someone’s been dragging those shackles for too long.
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Aren’t we all?
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I especially love this line, “My wind has come at last. The burdens are put down and my soul bleeds free.” Loved that he/she was finally released from the chains that kept them from being free. Wonderful story.
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🙂 Thank you~~^^
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